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Originally Posted by Tranquility
Well, i'm not very good at this thing Jared. So i'm gonna tell you what my teacher tells me.
Increase your vocabulary, broadin the things in your mind. As tough as an Oxen, that's used alot. Think of something not a lot of people right. You have to stick out.
Other then a couple of off words, pretty good poem.
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True, but at 11 pm its the closest I can come to a word that describes stubborn, but I'm gonna keep looking, thanks for the advice
and any specific "off" words you can point out?
long story short if mine is better than 1/5 of my "team" at school I get published.