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Old 11-13-2008, 09:09 PM
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Originally Posted by EskimoANM View Post
Pretty nice free-verse poem, especially since you're in grade 8.

Also for 5-7 minutes, that pretty nice. It usually takes me 5-10 minutes just to generate some ideas .
Thanks for the comments everyone.

But yea, in fourth grade my teacher taught me a certain style of writing which allows you to write as you go. It has its ups and downs, and lastly if anyone has any corrections for me, please don't be afraid to comment =] This is going to be entered in a 8th grade competition and sure the rest of my team *in our school the students are separated into teams of around 200 kids* is full of idiots, but still better safe then sorry.

But again, thanks for the comments so far.
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