Can I Get Ezud's Opinion?

[Jared]

Well, I have another writing poem due tomorrow, this time the topic was Susan B. Anthony.

I have another day to make improvements, please keep in mind I wrote this is around 10 mins, and i am 14.

Constructive criticism is appreciated, unnecessary posts will be reported <3

Unless I love you of course.

One To Be Remembered.
A poem about Susan B. Anthony

She was the angel that found the light in a world of hatred and misunderstanding.

With the gentleness of a newborn kitten playing with yarn.

Yet wielding the attitude towards prejudice like that of a lion chasing his prey

Susan B. Anthony is one to be remembered.

With a tear filled battle with the government of the past.

Deeds of ***8220;Criminal***8221; acts done for the overall good.

Susan B. Anthony is one to be remembered.

The soul of a warrior, locked away in a women***8217;s heart.

Prepared to battle for her beliefs, and never to give up.

Susan B. Anthony was one to be remembered.

She reminds the ignorant of the hardships of women.

Her teachings for the overall good of a nation.

Susan B. Anthony was one to be remembered.

Her greatest Achievement of all ***8211;

Doing the impossible and making a difference.

Susan B. Anthony is one to be remembered.

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By Jared ****** an 8th grade student.